I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello, Karson I just wanna say great attempt but this wasn't completed Right if you need some help you can look on my blog You just need to change a few things Then your good to Go anyways this was pretty good just a few tweaks and It will be amazing.
Kia Ora Karson, I value your effort in attempting this task. And it is wonderful to continue collaborating if you wish to. Otherwise, keep up the brilliant mahi!
Hello, Karson I just wanna say great attempt but this wasn't completed Right if you need some help you can look on my blog
ReplyDeleteYou just need to change a few things Then your good to Go anyways this was pretty good just a few tweaks and It will be amazing.
Ka pai Josh. I appreciate your supportive comment and gesture of assistance for Karson. Thank you again.
DeleteKia Ora Karson, I value your effort in attempting this task. And it is wonderful to continue collaborating if you wish to. Otherwise, keep up the brilliant mahi!
ReplyDeleteI forgot about the music lol
ReplyDeletei thought it was finished
ReplyDeletebut is wasn't
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