I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Karson, this is Cam. Thanks for sharing your information report about kiwis. I thought the information about what they eat was really interesting and I didn't know that their wings are called 'vestigial' - that's a great word to add to my vocabulary. I noticed that in the section about what kiwis eat, you have repeated a sentence, perhaps you could fix that up. My question is about the first section, when you say that kiwis are endangered, can you please tell my why you think it's important to save kiwis? What do you think makes them a special creature?
Kia ora Karson, this is Cam. Thanks for sharing your information report about kiwis. I thought the information about what they eat was really interesting and I didn't know that their wings are called 'vestigial' - that's a great word to add to my vocabulary. I noticed that in the section about what kiwis eat, you have repeated a sentence, perhaps you could fix that up. My question is about the first section, when you say that kiwis are endangered, can you please tell my why you think it's important to save kiwis? What do you think makes them a special creature?
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